Freedom is all in the eye of the beholder. A person who burns a government building due to supposed unjust causes, is one man’s freedom fighter and another man’s terrorist. Difference of opinion is inevitable, in future, present, and in past. In present times of the revolution, what freedom is has become a complicated thought that has put my colony of New Jersey and the remaining 12 colonies in conflicting groups of loyalists and patriots. QUOTE ABOUT WHAT PATRIOTS THOUGHT, but this is something similar to what I as loyalists hope for and believe will come from the loyalty to my home country Britain. My view is that a common believe of the patriots is that the loyalists are in it for the money, or even view us as cowards, a way of giving up and retreating to the supposed strongest power. Truth be told, yes benefits are relevant as would be by choosing any side, this I do not deny, but we still have much to loose in the same. Which is where I fall into the conclusion that Great Britain has been proven worthy of our respect and loyalty and I believe by staying within their government, what the patriots and loyalists both wish to achieve will fall into place.
1 comment:
ok so imonly being an asshole cuz im your friend... so\
"feeling" should be pluralized
i think the second sentence is a better hook... but thats just me
i dont think you need a quote in your intro PH cuz you dont need to put in supporting detials till the body =]
"My view is that a common conceived believe of the patriots is that the loyalists are in it for the money,"
----common conceived believe---? what is that?!? lol
ahahaha you and me = BFF!!! lol jk have fun
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